At The End

Last night before sleeping, 3 versions of the a poem came to me...so i wrote them down on paper...now post in blog~~ take all as the same poem of take it as 3...doesn't matter to me^^

1st version (original that came to my mind - no edit)

With the wave of my hand,
My time is at it's end.
Where thoughts lie,
My life lies.

With a wave of my hand,
My life is at it's end.
Where souls linger,
My soul lingers.

With the wave of my hand,
Everything came to an end.
Time's up, it's time to go,
It's time for me to go where all lost go.






2nd version (edit some parts after re-reading it)

With the wave of the hand,
The end is in the hand.
Where thoughts lie,
The thoughts lie.

With the wave of the hand,
The life is at it's end.
Where souls linger,
The soul lingers.

With the wave of the hand,
Everything comes to an end.
Time's up, it's time to go,
It's time to go to where all lost go.






3rd version (last edit)

With the wave of a hand,
Time is at it's end.
Where thoughts lie,
Life itself lies.

With a wave of a hand,
A life is at it's end.
Where souls linger,
A soul lingers.

With the wave of a hand,
Everything came to an end.
Time's up, it's time to go,
It's time to go where all lost go.

Created by: Brian Woon
2nd version edited by: Brother Bear
3rd version edited by: Shinigami1806
In other words, all are created by me.
Copyrighted to Brian Woon
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